Rami Ungar The Writer

Good Friday, Followers of Fear. Hannah and Other Stories has been out for six days, and is hopefully scaring the pants off plenty of readers. In the meantime, I’m finishing off this revival of #FirstLineFriday with the last story in Hannah: Poor, Unfortunate Souls.

So, for those of you who are unfamiliar, #FirstLineFriday is a tag I used to do all the time and which I decided to bring back for the release of Hannah. For the past six weeks, I’ve been posting the openings of each story, one by one, for this tag. And now, I’m down to the final story.

But first, the rules. For a #FirstLineFriday post, you must:

1. Create a post on your blog titled #FirstLineFriday, hashtag and all.
2. Explain the rules like I’m doing now.
3. Post the first one or two lines of a potential story, a story-in-progress, or a completed/published story.
4. Ask your readers for feedback and try to get them to try #FirstLineFriday on their own blogs (tagging is encouraged but not necessary).

Today’s story, besides being the last one in Hannah and Other Stories, takes us to the bowels of the Paris catacombs. Ladies, gentlemen, and non-binary classy citizens, I present to you the opening of Poor, Unfortunate Souls:

Over a rock and along her belly Ozma crawled, following Naomi and Baptiste, the tour guide, as they traveled through the dark. With every inch she traveled, she found a single thought repeating itself: When we get out of here, I swear I’m either going to strangle this girl, quit on the spot, or both!

Trust me, Ozma, it’s only going to get much, much worse.

If you would like to find out what happens, you can now buy a copy of Hannah and Other Stories using the link below. And if you like what you read, please leave a review online somewhere so I and other readers know what you think.

Also, if you would like to do this tag as well, consider yourself tagged. Just copy and paste the rules onto your own blog and then have fun with it! I look forward to seeing what you put out there.

That’s all for now, my Followers of Fear. You can expect another blog post tomorrow, most likely. I bet you can guess on the subject as well. Until then, good night and pleasant nightmares!