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Surprise, I have a new publication! And it’s a short essay.

So, if you’re unaware, the Horror Writers Association does a series of articles called Halloween Haunts every year. The articles are written by and contributed by members and can range in subjects from Halloween to horror writing to life in the HWA. It’s a great way for Halloween people to talk about their favorite holiday during the month of October.

And I’ve always wanted to contribute, but everything I thought to write about always seemed less than worthy for an article. So, I never tried. However, earlier in the month, Kevin Wetmore, a well-known figure in the HWA who is running Halloween Haunts this year, contacted me out of the blue and asked me to contribute! And yeah, that was cool, but I also didn’t think I was the right choice to submit an article. And I did let him know my worries regarding subject matter.

Still, he encouraged me, and I decided to at least try and think of something. And, to my surprise, a few hours after he messaged me, I had a great idea for an article.

That article is now published on the HWA website, and is linked through the button below. “A Little Yard to Work In” goes into the evolution of the Halloween displays I put up in my front yard. And while I wish I had put in some photos for the essay (a Halloween yard display is a visual thing, after all), I’m very proud of it. How could I not be? I get to share my love of creative yard displays for Halloween, after all.

Anyway, I would like to thank Kevin Wetmore for inviting me to contribute to Halloween Haunts this year. (Only the second time I’ve ever been invited to contribute to something, and the first time I’ve actually gotten in!) And I would like to thank you for (I’m assuming you are) reading the article. As always, I appreciate your support as I work hard to become a full time writer.

Until next time (which, who knows? Could be later this week or early next week), my Followers of Fear, good night, pleasant nightmares, and 17 days till Halloween! I’ll see you real soon.

In fact, I might be in your yard right now. Among your Halloween displays. Look outside, if you dare.

Praise Anubis, Osiris, and Amun-Ra! After four years, I have finally reached this point!

So, if you’re unaware, let me explain. Back in 2022, after I had moved into my current home and needed a project to work on, I started a mummy novel tentatively called Crawler. The plot followed a mummy on a rampage in a small Ohio town. I got about eight chapters into what was then thirty before I had to put the novel on the back burner and work on something else. I thought, at most, I would be leaving Crawler alone for a couple of weeks. Maybe a few months.

It was four years. Yeah, it was four years. I have no excuses. I just kept finding other things to work on, and I kept meaning to get back to it, but I just never did.

Until this year, that is. When I finally decided I would get back to the novel and finish it. And then in July, right around the time I started the novel four years ago, I started working on it again. I went over the chapters I originally wrote, updating them as I went. And then, after those were edited, I started on new material. New chapters. Some I inserted into the narrative on the spur of the moment, thus expanding the story from thirty to thirty-four chapters.

And despite how crazy my life gets, and several nights where I had to be a responsible adult and take care of things at home rather than write, and God knows what else, I have been making steady progress. And as of last night, I have finished seventeen chapters. Meaning, unless I add more chapters on the spur of the moment, I am officially halfway through Crawler.

Honestly, I am ecstatic about this. There were times when I thought this book would languish, unfinished, for years and years. And when I finally got back to it, and there were nights where I couldn’t work on it for one reason or another, I wondered what the hell I was doing. But, maybe because I’m so damned stubborn, I persisted with it. And now, half the book is written, rather than just eight chapters.

And damn, it’s a lot of material, too! At the time I’m writing it, the page count (8.5″x11″, double-spaced, twelve-point font, Times New Roman) is 204, and the word count is 55,845. To say the least, this book is going to be a real doorstopper when it’s done. As long as Snake or Symphony for Walpurgis when it’s done (and those are some chunky books). I hope that doesn’t scare off potential publishers!

But that’s far in the future. In the meantime, I’m going to take a short break from Crawler. (Don’t worry, I don’t plan to let it grow into another years-long break.) And during that break, I’m going to work on some shorter stuff, including an essay that a friend of mine inspired me to write and which I hope to submit later this month. After that, assuming there’s nothing stopping me, I’ll get back to Crawler and hopefully finish it up.

I look forward to the day when I can make that announcement.

That’s all for now, my Followers of Fear. I’m going to brew a cup of tea, read a little, and then hit the hay. Until next time, good night and pleasant nightmares.

Break out the good liquor! Dance around the bonfire in costume! Leave out meat for the carnivorous horses! We’re celebrating a book birthday today!

And as you can clearly see from all the little hints I’m dropping, the book in question is Hannah and Other Stories. That’s right, Hannah and Other Stories is officially three years old today.

Now, for those of you who don’t know, Hannah and Other Stories was first published by BSC Publishing Group on September 23, 2023. It’s a collection of seven short stories, including tales of ghosts, budding serial killers, and carnivorous horses, among other things. Yeah, carnivorous horses. Those tend to stick out in people’s minds. And people tend to stick in-between the horses’ teeth, but nobody wants to talk about that!

Anyway, originally it was released only as an ebook, and was out until the end of 2024, when BSC Publishing returned the rights to the book to me. On the second anniversary of Hannah‘s publication, September 2025, I independently re-released Hannah with a new cover, a new edit, and–get this!–a paperback edition! So, it’s not only the three-year anniversary of when Hannah and Other Stories was released, but the one-year anniversary of when the paperback edition was released.

Double the anniversary, double the liquor. Am I right?

Anyway, I’m happy to say that, since I re-released the book last year, lots of people have been checking it out and a few have even left ratings and reviews online. And from the sound of it, most seem to enjoy the book. Okay, one guy got triggered by what he read in the story “The Autopsy Kid and Doctor Sarah,” and left a zero-star rating on Goodreads (I didn’t know that was a thing until it happened), but still, he’s the outlier. The majority seem to like it.

And why not? I mean, here are the stories inside:

  • “Hannah:” Two paranormal investigators break into an abandoned school to go ghost-hunting, and discover way more than they bargained for.
  • “Queen Alice:” An investigative journalist looks into the newest urban legend from the internet, and discovers there may be more truth there than they previously believed.
  • “The Autopsy Kid and Doctor Sarah:” A teenage girl living in Paris is blackmailed by a university student living in her building to play a terrible game with him.
  • “Fuseli’s Horses:” A horse ranch in Ohio takes in some pregnant horses whose offspring are more than a little unusual.
  • “The Red Bursts:” A Jewish couple go to visit a family member who has dropped off the grid, and discover something otherworldly has occurred in the small Minnesota town she’s been living in.
  • “What Errour Awoke:” What started out as a reading from an old English fairy tale grows into something else as a grad student and his girlfriend encounter an ancient being and her offspring in the first year of a pandemic.
  • “Poor Unfortunate Souls:” A party in the Paris catacombs goes violently astray when a malformed monster gatecrashes the joint.

I mean, that all sounds pretty awesome, doesn’t it?And get this: “Hannah” was actually adapted into a radio play back in 2024. Yeah, it was on the local NPR station and performed by some high school students. It was really awesome, especially for my first ever adapted story. You can still listen to it by clicking the below button if you want.

Anyway, my Followers of Fear, if this has made you want to read Hannah and Other Stories, then I’ll include links for where to buy it below (no surprise there). And why not? Not only is it an anniversary, but we’re thirty-eight days away from Halloween, so grabbing a copy for spooky season just makes sense. And if you like what you read, I hope you’ll leave a review. Positive or negative, I love reader feedback. And those reviews help not just me, but other readers, in the long run.

I guess that about wraps things up for now, my Followers of Fear. But I’ll hopefully have something new to post soon. Until then, good night, happy reading, and pleasant nightmares.

Me holding my copy of “No One Heard Her Screams” after receiving it in the mail.

One of the best parts of being a writer is that I have gotten to meet and make friends out of many of my colleagues. For some of them, I’ve even been able to see them early in their careers and watch them grow and get their early successes. Ann O’Mara Heyward is one of those authors. Since the moment she joined HWA Ohio (which I run), I’ve had the pleasure of seeing her break out into the horror scene and even read early drafts of her stories.

Earlier this year, Ann published her first collection, No One Heard Her Screams, a collection of eighteen tales she’s published. And because I read some of the stories in the earlier drafts, Ann sent me a free, signed copy. Earlier this month, I finally got around to reading it. And what did I think?

To say the least, this is an excellent collection.

Ann has a strong voice and an excellent handling on what’s scary. Not to mention, she often knows how to tell a story in under seven-thousand words, or even five-thousands, and still give it a good beginning, middle, and payoff. I am in awe of authors who manage to consistently keep their stories that short!

My personal favorite was “Gehenna,” a story about a woman in a small town who chronicles the horrors that occurred in her community during a tent revival. Even with the supernatural elements, the events of the story felt very believable. Other highlights of the anthology, which kept me reading through to the end of each story despite my lunch break ending, included “The Monster Maker,” about a mortician who gets a rather unusual client; “The Rookery,” about a local swamp monster living near a condo community in Florida (sounds more interesting than my condo community); and “Zeke Street,” about what happens when you try to monetize the zombie apocalypse.

Actually, that last one would make a great movie. Zombies may have been used back to death, but it’s always great to see a new take on the trope. And “Zeke Street” is definitely a different take.

Now, not all of the stories worked for me. “The Waiting Room” and “The Dog” both felt like they had letdowns for endings.

But the rest were very good and had interesting concepts. “Missing Lula” involved a real life serial killer, and was fairly spooky; “Consignment” executed its concept with a lot of fun; and stories like “Cleveland,” “The Kitchen Window,” and “The Guests” were wonderfully nihilistic.

On a scale of 1 to 5, I am giving No One Heard Her Screams by Ann O’Mara Heyward a 4.8 out of 5. Full of creepy and perfectly dark stories. If you’re in the mood for something to spooky to read in short bursts this Halloween season, this is a good collection to go with it.

“I’m not dead yet,
I can dance and I can sing.
I am not dead yet, I can do the Highland fling.
I am not dead yet. No need to go to bed.
No need to call the doctor because I’m not yet dead.
“

That, my Followers of Fear, is from the chorus of “Not Yet Dead,” one of the songs in the musical comedy Monty Python’s Spamalot. A show I would love to see someday, but as of yet, I have not had the opportunity to do so.

It is also a good opener to a post to let you all know that, yes, I am still alive. I know it might seem like I wasn’t, or maybe, God forbid, I have given up on this blog! After all, it’s been nearly a month since I last posted on here. But in reality, I’ve just been super busy lately. You know how it is: between the writing and the day job and everything else, I’ve just been a busy little demon.

Plus, as I mentioned back in February, I don’t want to post just to keep up with some demand or to make sure I stay visible. I want to post because there’s something worth posting about. Whether that be my thoughts on writing or horror, a review of a book I really think you should read, or I have an announcement that I want the world to know about.

Sadly, I don’t have any of those right now, but I did feel it was necessary to check in. And since I’m here, why don’t I give you some updates on how things are going with me? Ready? Okay!

  • The writing is going well. I’ve been making slow but steady progress on Crawler, the mummy novel I’ve been working on. It’s not as fast as I would hope, but it’s better than making no progress, which is what I was making for four years. And I will continue to work at it, while also finding a more permanent title for the story. (There’s a movie with a similar name coming out soon, and “Crawler” was never meant to be a permanent name, anyway.)
    I’ve also been working on and sending out other stories here and there, and I’m hoping to have news on some of them any day now. Who knows? Maybe I’ll even have a publisher for The Shape of Evil, my 3D Printer from Hell novel. You never know.
  • I got a pay raise at work. This is very good, as I’ve had to replace both my water tank and my washer and dryer this summer (and the latter was a saga of trying to find something that fit my tiny laundry room, let me tell you). But it also means that I’m able to save more, which means I get closer to writing full time. Yeah, I know what you’re thinking: how does getting paid more at the day job lead to writing full time? Well, it means I can save a bit more after each paycheck (hopefully, anyway). And if that happens and I decide to leave that day job for writing someday, I’ll have more savings to rely on and I won’t have to go back to work in an office so quickly.
  • I’m planning some travel for the near future. It’s still early days, but I’m working on going on a trip or two not related to a convention or book event. It’s been some time since I did any sort of trip like that (remember, my last one was supposed to be Israel in winter 2024, but that got canceled due to the war), so I’m looking forward to it. However, a lot of details are still in the air, so I will wait to give you any specifics until I have some stuff nailed down. Until then, know that I’m looking forward to sharing plenty of photos with you.

Anyway, that’s all for now, my Followers of Fear. I can guarantee it won’t be another month till you hear from me, but it might still be a while. In the meantime, you can keep up with me by following my social media accounts, which I will link to down below. Until next time, my Followers of Fear, good night, pleasant nightmares, and 55 days till Halloween. Who’s already putting up their Halloween displays?

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Happy birthday to the blog,
Happy birthday to the blog.
Happy Birthday to Rami Ungar the Writer.
Happy birthday tot he blog.

Well, this snuck up on me. But it’s true: today is the fifteenth anniversary of when this blog first came online. I still remember the day in the library that I created the blog. I had no idea what I was doing, and those early posts really show it. Still, I kept blogging, blogging several times a month (occasionally several times a day). And now, this blog is just under half the age. And it’s been around longer than some of my own IRL relationships, if you can believe it.

And it’s even harder to believe when you think about how transient anything online can be. Especially blogs. Some have lasted for years but have been shut down for any of a thousand reasons, including creator burnout or lack of interest. Others have transitioned to vlogs or to short form platforms like Twitter or Instagram. Many more blogs may last a couple of months or years at most, with their writers getting bored, too busy to keep blogging, or discouraged by lack of numbers.

Honestly, that last one could have done me in once upon a time. I mention this every bloggaversary, but I still remember how I was posting frequently back in college and only getting maybe one or two views a day, if any. I often wondered if I was just spinning my wheels uselessly, trying to get people interested in books that might never come out. Thankfully, I’m stubborn and optimistic, and I kept telling myself that, with time, I would gain a larger audience and see people respond to what I was putting out there in bigger numbers.

As it turned out, I was right. With consistency, and learning what made for a decent reading experience on a blog, I gained an audience. At the time I’m writing this, Rami Ungar the Writer has gained:

  • 305,591 views
  • 1,484 followers (bloggers and email sign ups)
  • 2,294 posts (including this one)
  • 8,820 likes
  • 6,850 comments
  • 1,236,744 words

(I know it’s considered a little cringe to list your stats like that, but it’s the 15th anniversary of this blog. I’m allowed a little leeway, right?)

But best of all, through this blog, I’ve gained not just readers, but friends. I said before that this blog has lasted longer than some relationships. However, some relationships are because of this blog, and a few have even been around as long as this blog. (I was actually messaging one of these friends on Friday, and messaged them today. We make each other laugh.)

And whether they’re friends or not, everyone following this blog is a Follower of Fear. That probably includes you, if you’re reading this. You’ve stuck with me from when I started college, through my higher education, graduation and an internship abroad, a grueling job search and starting my new job, the pandemic, and everything else that’s come with. Plus, there’s been my writing journey. From my early short stories and self-published books, to finding publishers for Rose and Hannah and Other Stories, to self-publishing books like The Pure World Comes and Symphony for Walpurgis, and now trying to find homes for books like The Shape of Evil.

Plus, numerous short stories and articles published in a variety of venues.

And the many events I’ve vended at.

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And that one time my friends and I formed a small press to publish an anthology focused on Ohio horror writers.

And my time with the Horror Writers Association and running the Ohio chapter of the organization.

And all the stuff I’m working on now.

The point is, through this blog, you guys have continued to support me and even read and review my work. And I want you to know that I am incredibly grateful for that support. I hope you’ll continue to watch my journey as I work towards becoming a full-time writer and create great stories that entertain and frighten all who read them.

(Speaking of which, if you’re interested, I’ll leave the link to my books page down below. From plant/human hybrids and strange gods to Mafia-hunting serial killers and carnivorous horses, I have something for every horror fan, including some free stuff. And if you end up reading something, I hope you’ll leave a review. Not only do reviews help me out, but they help other readers as well.)

Anyway, that’s all for now, my Followers of Fear. I’ve got stuff to do today, so I better get to it. But don’t worry, I’ll be sure to celebrate this anniversary somehow. Maybe I’ll even have a tiny slice of cake or something. You never know.

Until next time, my Followers of Fear (which may be very soon), good night, pleasant nightmares, and 90 days till Halloween. if you’re not getting ready for spooky season, what are you doing with your life?

You know, I thought I would have this post out much sooner than this. But things have been busy these last two weeks. There’s been work, the Columbus Book Festival,* an article to write, and even submitting a short story for Bram Stoker consideration (if you didn’t know, that takes a lot more work than you know). All that slowed me down and kept me from working on my writing.

Oh, I may have also written a poem and a flash fiction piece on the spur of the moment. That took up an afternoon.

But I have finally done it. As of last night, I have finished going over all the chapters of Crawler I’ve previously written.

Now, if you didn’t know, Crawler is the tentative name of a mummy novel I started writing in 2022. I got about eight chapters in before stuff involving Hannah and Other Stories popped up and I had to put it on the back burner. And then, through various circumstances and lots of projects, four years passed. And I have not been happy with myself for letting it sit unfinished for so long.

That’s why I decided to make sure I got back to it this summer. And I’m happy to say, as of last night, I’m all caught up with the story thus far.

So, how is Crawler so far? Well, I knew in the four years there were things I would need to change. I even had a few ideas of what needed to change. However, even I was surprised by how many flaws I noticed. Granted, it’s a first draft, so flaws are par for the course. But there were quite a few parts where I was like, “What the hell? That makes no sense! Why would this or that character do something like that?”

I also ended up cutting a lot of sections that were unnecessary or rewriting others so they flowed better and didn’t stick out like sore thumbs. Or changed the characters’ motivations or feelings so they would fit better in the story. And my God, did I do so much work to make the timeline make more sense.

I guess it’s a sign of how much I’ve matured, both as a person and as a writer, in these four years. Then again, it has been four years, and a lot has happened. I’ve read lots of books, written and published lots of new stories, and had all sorts of experience. It’s natural I’ve learned a few tricks and gotten a bit better at writing stories. Not to mention noticing the issues my stories have before I let others see them.

So, what’s next? Well, obviously the next time I work on it, it’ll be the first time I’ve written new material for Crawler in four years. I’m looking forward to it, but I’m also worried that it’ll take forever to get through the rest of the book. Hell, I’m worried it’ll take time just to get through a single chapter! Just the first eight are around thirty-six thousand words, or a decent-sized novella. Yeah, this book is going to be a doorstopper when it’s done.

And you never know what life will throw at you. For all I know, next week I could get told to edit something for publication, and spend a month just doing that!

Well, no reason to get worried about what might or might not happen. I’ll keep working on Crawler and hopefully make some good progress before the summer is out. Hell, maybe I’ll even be finished with it by the end of the year. I’m going to try and see if I can make it happen!

Anyway, that’s all for now. It’s late, I’m tired, and I have work tomorrow, so I should get ready for bed. Hopefully I have something to post about very soon. If not about Crawler, then maybe some good news or some thoughts on writing. You never know.

So, until next time, my Followers of Fear, good night and pleasant nightmares.

*BTW, this year I hit a new record. 51 books sold! I’ve never had such a successful festival before. Hopefully it’s not the last time I have such success, either.

Peter Pan is a character/story that every child loves growing up. However, as we actually grow up, not only do we see the tragedy of the character, but you also realize he’s kind of creepy. I mean, he hides outside a window to listen to a girl tell her brothers stories. And in the books, he’s a tyrant who kills the Lost Boys when they get too old, among other things. It’s not surprising that, as the years have gone by, more and more stories have delved into the dark side of Peter Pan.

In Cynthia Pelayo’s take on a dark Peter Pan story, It Came From Neverland, we meet a very different Wendy from the one who appears in J.M. Barrie’s book.* Now in her twenties, the adult Wendy is scarred from her experiences with Peter. She tries her best to move on, teaching at the children’s home that took her in after she and her brothers returned, and reads to soldiers returning from fighting in WWI. But then strange events happen around London. Children get injured or go missing. Mysterious fogs and crows feathers appear all over the place. And Wendy hears a whisper from her past. A whisper belonging to a boy who’s not a boy, whom she thought was dead after he killed so many. And he’s come back for her.

Cynthia Pelayo writes a lot of stories that are reinterpreted fairy tales (I loved her take on the Sleeping Beauty story, Vanishing Daughters), and with It Came From Neverland, that talent is on full display. With strong and concise language, she crafts a suspenseful tale that really lets us get into the head of Wendy Darling, aged into adulthood long before she hit her teen years and trying to survive when the past haunts her everyday. You really get to know her as we see her deal with the return of Peter Pan.

Speaking of which, the relationship between her and Peter was chilling! It’s the definition of an abusive and toxic relationship, with Peter being nice before lying, manipulating, gaslighting, and finding all sorts of ways to belittle Wendy. Just from the short episodes we see, it’s enough to make you shudder from how horrible he is to her.

And like I said, this book is suspenseful. A lot of time is spent showing Peter’s encroachment on Wendy’s life, as well as the life of her brothers. And it is frightening! It reminds me of what Stephen King said about the three types of horror, and how terror is the one that’s hardest to do, because it leaves you with that sense of unease that refuses to go. That terror is put on full display here, creating a frightening atmosphere that lingers long after you put the book down.

My only major criticism is that the parts exploring Wendy’s past with Peter are too short. I didn’t mind that they were out of order, but for a book that was marketed as Peter Pan meets IT, I expected more time spent in the past. To really feel like I was in Neverland with those characters when they were children. What we got was more like short vignettes, and while those were great, I felt like they weren’t enough for me.

However, on the whole, it is a great novel that I practically flew through each time I picked it up. On a scale of 1 to 5, I give It Came From Neverland by Cynthia Pelayo a 4.8 out of 5. This is definitely one to settle down with. Just be careful, though. You might end up hooked!

*By the way, Barrie’s mentioned in the book as someone who heard Wendy’s story and twisted it into the child-friendly version we know today. And can I just say, I love that he’s as much a hack in the book as I’ve always thought he was? I got a laugh out of that.

You might have heard of this novel, even if you haven’t read it or even if you don’t read horror. That’s because it recently won the Pulitzer Prize, the first horror novel to ever do so. And given the stature of the Pulitzer Prize, that’s quite the accomplishment (though as my friend and colleague Kevin Wetmore noted while hosting the Bram Stoker Awards last month, “a horror novel wins the Bram Stoker award every year”). Recognizing what a big deal this is, I decided to check it out and got the audio book. After all, what kind of horror novel wins the Pulitzer Prize?

Well, a rather unusual novel, as it turns out.

Taking place during the Meuse-Argonne offensive in WWI, Angel Down follows Private Cyril Bagger, a con artist who was tricked into enlisting and can’t wait to rooking inexperienced gamblers back in the States. He is commanded by Major General Reis, the commander in the offensive, to go and find the source of an unearthly shrieking that is causing the men to go insane. If it turns out to be a soldier dying slowly, they are to put him out of his misery. Bagger is joined by four other soldiers; Private Louis Arno, an illiterate teenager who lied about his age to enlist and has attached himself to Bagger like a koala to its mother; Private Hugh Popkin, a violent meathead with no brains, a raging case of the clap, and an even stronger raging case for a girl back home; Private Vincent Goodspeed, a twitchy graverobber who steals from the bodies of the dead to sell to both sides; and Private Ben Veck, the group’s only black soldier, who is suffering from PTSD and wants to believe he’s been chosen for a greater purpose.

Upon finding the source of the shrieking, they discover it’s an angel in the form of a human woman. One that resembles someone each of the men know. Realizing that the ambitious Reis would use the angel for his own purposes, they go AWOL and take the angel with them, leading to an unavoidable chain of events that will not only change their lives, but maybe even change the world.

So, like I said, this is a rather unusual novel. Angel Down is apparently written in the style of a single, continuous sentence (as I had the audio book, I could only half tell), so every tenth word is an “and” or a “so.” This is nothing new in literature, as plenty of novels, most famously The Waves by Virginia Woolf, has been written this way. I’m assuming Kraus wrote it this way because stream-of-consciousness style writing like this was popular among Modernist writers post-WWI, and he’s paying tribute to that. Plus, it makes the novel stand out.

However, I did hear from plenty of fellow horror fans who find the writing style grating. And honestly, I understood; I could only listen to the audio book during certain moods, like when I was driving or cooking. Otherwise, the style would get under my skin in a bad way. (And the narrator, bless him, narrated the book so that it at least sounded like it had normal sentences.)

All that aside, most of the characters are fully realized, especially Bagger. He’s the son of a preacher who doesn’t believe in anything except himself and controlling his life. At the same time, he’s also perturbed that he likes Arno and protect the kid, and the events of the novel set him on a path of transformation. Arno and Veck are also quite sympathetic, especiallyt he latter after you learn more about him. And Reis and Popkin are easy to hate (especially Popkin).

As for the angel…she’s an enigma. She sets things in motion and for most of the novel is a MacGuffin that motivates the characters. However, later on, she does start to affect the story and the characters more, and it’s…it’s hard to tell how I should feel about her. To like her or hate her. To consider her hero or villain. Or maybe she’s just the bringer of revelations? I guess any and all of those opinions work, given that she’s an angel, and therefore beyond our ordinary comprehensions. But still, she’s a lot and it makes it hard to pin down your feelings about her.

Finally, I will say that the book does a great job of getting the horrors of war through to the reader. Just like All Quiet on the Western Front did nearly a full century ago, it does not hold back. From descriptions of the bodies covered in clay and blood, to the fear each soldier feels when German bullets or mortar fire flies overhead, to the abstract depictions of the “engines of war,” it is enough to dissuade some readers that any good can come of war. (Something some of our current crop of leaders could learn from.)

Overall, I think I will give Angel Down by Daniel Kraus a 3.8 out of 5. The narration style may not be to everyone’s tastes, but the story, characters, and themes are engaging and make you want to keep going. I can see why this book won the Pulitzer Prize. And if you decide to read it, perhaps you will, too.

Also, Happy Fourth of July, my Followers of Fear. Whatever you’re doing this Independence Day, stay safe and have fun!

Earlier this month, I had the pleasure of reviewing The Curse of Hester Gardens by Tamika Thompson (see my review here). To say the least, it was quite the read. And since I’m lucky enough to be friends with its author, I thought I would pick her thoughts and see what she has to say about her book. So, ladies, gentlemen, and non-binary nobility, please welcome to the blog Tamika Thompson!

Rami Ungar: Welcome to my blog, Tamika. Tell us about yourself and your new novel, The Curse of Hester Gardens.

Tamika Thompson: I’m originally from Detroit, and I grew up about a mile away from a public housing project called Herman Gardens, which is a strong architectural inspiration for Hester Gardens. At eighteen, I left Detroit to attend Columbia University, where I studied Political Science. I went on to the University of Southern California to study journalism, and it was there that I reported on gang violence in Southern California. After graduation, I worked for several years as a journalist, and eventually spent two years researching gun violence in America. The lived experience, studies in global and national politics, and journalism background all came together in this debut novel.

The Curse of Hester Gardens is a gothic novel set in a public housing project that follows one mother, Nona McKinley, whose oldest son is shot to death and whose husband is in prison, as she faces the twin specters of a supernatural curse and gun violence while trying to keep her remaining sons alive in their high-crime neighborhood.

RU: Tell us about your main character Nona McKinley. I find her quite the compelling lead.

TT: I am the first to admit that Nona has flaws. Having grown up in a public housing project and then attempting to raise three boys in another public housing project on the other side of the fictional town of Medford, Michigan, she is parenting in the worst possible circumstances in a high-crime neighborhood. She still tries to find joy, pleasure, and some semblance of normalcy in a terrible system of oppression and predation. She is strong and God-fearing, but she’s also having an affair with the married church pastor!

I see her on a continuum with Peter, the leader of the local Hester Boys gang. Readers believe Peter to be a villain, and I believe both Nona and Peter are capable of tremendous love and tenderness and also tremendous hatred and violence.

RU: I would describe Hester Gardens as “unflinching,” especially in its exploration of gun violence, urban violence, and urban neglect. What was writing a novel that explored all of that, and was also a frightening supernatural novel, like?

TT: It was an emotional journey, and it was years in the making. This story was being written inside of me before I was even a writer. The book is dedicated to my late uncle, who was shot to death when I was young. I mine a lot of my personal experience to tell this story. I also spent two years researching the epidemic of gun violence in America. When I sat to write, it took me five years to bring it together before I ever let an agent read it.

I’m happy when a reader tells me the novel made them cry because I cried a lot when I wrote it. I love all of my characters. None of them are villains to me because they’ve all been traumatized and oppressed by this country.

Balancing the social with the supernatural was a manageable task because I stuck with Nona’s story, her grief over losing her oldest son and how that colored every experience she had and every decision she made after. Her panic about keeping her remaining boys safe drives the narrative, as well as her personal isolation and terror over not being believed by those around her. I let that carry the story, and I think that naturally creates the balance.

RU: You also explored gun violence as a theme in your short story, “The Creak in the Attic.” Which, coincidentally, was the first story I ever read by you. What was it like to work with that theme in a novel versus a short story?

TT: “The Creak on the Attic Stairs” appeared in The Rack Vol. 2, edited by Tom Deady, and it not only deals with the American gun violence epidemic, but it also is set in the same story world as The Curse of Hester Gardens. Tackling gun violence in a short horror story is in some ways harder because you have to showcase the haunting of grief, the perceived supernatural remnants of the dead, as well as let the reader in on the shock and outrage that gun violence creates with fewer words. Guns hurt people, and there is less space in a short piece to make that point and get around to the hope at the end. Because I believe the hope is necessary for the conversation on ending gun violence to continue.

RU: Can you tell us about some of your other works?

TT: Short stories are my first love. I’ve had works published in Interzone, Andromeda Spaceways, and Prairie Schooner, as well as turned into audio on the Creepy podcast and translated into Italian.

My first book-length publication was a multi-genre anthology that I co-edited called Graffiti. It included essays, fiction, and poetry, with works that were speculative and real. It won a Foreword INDIES Award for anthologies.

I also gathered my published short stories with original works and brought them together in a single-author collection called Unshod, Cackling, and Naked, which won the Next Generation Indie Book Award for Horror.

RU: What are you working on now? And what are your plans for the future?

TT: I am working on a standalone second novel, which is still squarely in the horror genre and tackles a social issue, but with a cast of characters and setting that couldn’t be more different from The Curse of Hester Gardens.

I am also working on a sci fi fantasy novella, and another all-speculative story collection.

I’m still also writing short stories. That part of my writing practice never goes away.

RU: What advice would you give other authors, regardless of background or experience?

TT: Persevere on behalf of your stories! I’ve met a lot of extremely talented authors who could write circles around me, and their work doesn’t make it into the world because they don’t make it to the finish line on their manuscripts. I believe the author’s first job is to persevere in completing a manuscript. Both drafting and revising. Revision is where the author earns readers, so keep going. Persevere!

RU: Final question: pretend you’re stuck on a desert island for a while and you can only bring three books with you till you’re picked up. What books are you bringing with you?

TT: Song of Solomon, Toni Morrison. It is arguable that Beloved is Morrison’s magnum opus, but I have always been drawn to the characters in Song of Solomon, particularly Pilate and Guitar. Morrison’s prose is intricate across all her books, but Milkman Dead’s journey of self-discovery is a powerful one, and the idea of Guitar’s Seven Days mission haunts me even now. Movements for civil and human rights by black people have only ever sought equity in America, but what if we decided to seek revenge? An eye for an eye? I shudder to think.

Middle Passage, Charles Johnson. I had the privilege of having a conversation with Johnson during a class I took early on in my writing practice and his tutelage on story and plot was foundational in my own practice. Middle Passage is not only brilliant, but a master class in creating work that is subversive.

Giovanni’s Room and The Fire Next Time by James Baldwin —I know I cheated on this one, but it is impossible to choose just one text by Baldwin. So, I went with my favorite of his fiction and non-fiction works. (To further cheat, may I suggest after reading The Fire Next Time to check out Between the World and Me by Ta-Nehisi Coates, as the latter is in conversation with the former?)

RU: I’ll allow it, since I remember Song of Solomon from college and considered it quite the powerful novel. Thank you for joining us, Tamika. I hope I can have you back here on the blog someday.

If you would like to find out more about Tamika, you can check out her website and social media, which I will link to below. And make sure to check out The Curse of Hester Gardens, which is definitely one of the best new novels of the year.

That’s all for now, my Followers of Fear. I hope you enjoyed this interview and will tune in for more. And until next time, good night and pleasant nightmares.