In my documentary class, we had to make a video on how we write, compose, or create literary projects. After we received our grades, we were allowed to upload the videos onto YouTube if we so desired. And so, I uploaded a video onto YouTube for the first time ever. And it was easier than I thought it would be.

The video below is called “This I Compose by Rami Ungar”, and it follows me as I write “Doll’s Game”, the short story I’ve been working on for my creative writing class. My teacher certainly liked it, because she commented on how I was able to keep it from just being a happy nding and how I was able to make a coherent narrative. For all my efforts, sweat, blood, tears, and anything else you can throw in, I got an A, which I’m pretty happy about.

The video isn’t anything fancy compared to what others have made, and it doesn’t have any background music, mostly because it’s hard to find music with the appropriate copyrights that you want to put into your videos. It also has my voice in it, which isn’t exactly musical to listen too. But I like it, and with any luck, you might too.

So here’s “This I Compose by Rami Ungar”. I hope you enjoy it, and I think this is the point I tell you to subscribe to my channel, though I’m not sure if I’ll be able to get more than one video a year up, if at all. I guess it depends on if I can get a video camera, a recording device, a Mac, and time to edit. Anyway, watch the film.

A List of My Favorite Bloodsuckers

Posted: October 28, 2012 in Review

“How do you like my new lipstick? It’s called Without a Briefcase Bloodsucker.

With zombies being the new vampires, vampires have finally settled back into that mode where they’re considered cool but nobody over-does them or anything. In fact, I stopped writing a vampire novel because vampires were “all the rage” for a little while, so it kind of made no sense to write one when everyone else was. But like I said, they’re not the trendy thing they used to be. Sure, you still got the fifth Twilight film and two vampire TV shows on the CW and HBO networks, but those are the last ones really making any waves, and they’re kind of fading, in my opinion.

So with that in mind, I thought it was high time I talk about my favorite vampires, the ones I consider cool and awesome. Trust me though, I won’t have anything from Twilight or anything that mostly appeals to tweens and bored single moms. The vampires I list have broad appeal, so I’m sure you’ll find something here you’ll like.

Of course, if you do like tortured, handsome, and undead, I’ve got some here that actually have some depth to them besides brooding and stalking girls.

Mina Tepes, Dance in the Vampire Bund

“I’m full of surprises.”

The female protagonist of the hit manga series by Nozomu Tamaki, Mina is over 200 years old and queen of the vampires despite the fact that she’s a pint-sized, twin-ponytailed girl. At the beginning of the series, Mina has just created the Bund, a refuge for vampires from all over the world to live in, off the coast of Tokyo. The Japanese government allowed Mina to do this in exchange for her paying off Japan’s humongous debt, but that doesn’t mean they’re happy about it. In addition, there are several vampire nobles who are attempting to gain Mina’s hand in marriage to secure power over the throne, and a mysterious organization named Telomere is attempting to destroy the Bund from the inside.

Mina is an interesting and muti-faceted character. On the outside, she acts naughty, cute and teases others like a regular kid. But don’t let that fool you; she’s a shrewd politician and calculating general to make the most veteran leaders feel small in comparison to her. Mina is also very smart and wise, and has knowledge on a number of subjects. And beneath all that, there’s another part of her that we rarely see: an insecure and scared young girl who often relies on the support of her subjects and her werewolf companion and male protagonist Akira to help her through tough situations. It’s all this that makes Mina such an unforgettable character.

However, I wouldn’t recommend this series for anyone younger than fifteen, and only if they have read an extensive amount of horror and romantic-comedy manga beforehand. Still, it’s a pretty awesome series.

Lestat de Lioncourt, The Vampire Chronicles

“I’m tortured…without looking like I’m sickly or haven’t bathed recently.

The original sexy vampire, he brooded and fell in love long before Edward Cullen ever graced the world. Originally the deuteroganist in Anne Rice’s Interview with the Vampire, Lestat quickly became popular and established himself as the main character of the series in the follow-up novels The Vampire Lestat and Queen of the Damned. Lestat was originally the youngest son of a nobleman in France before being made a vampire. He traveled the world, looking for companionship and losing it from time to time. At one point he met Louis, the main character of Interview, and in Lestat he formed a rock band that he left after Queen. In Memnoch the Devil he met God and the Devil, and in…you know what, why don’t you read it yourself? Those books were some of the best years of my short life, I tell you.

Lestat is a theatrical man, able to act sophisticated and like a gangster at any time. He also is a deep philosopher, viewing the world as a sort of Savage Garden of beauty and violence, and a romantic as well, loving many over the years and only having a true connection maybe once or twice over the series. Having legions of loyal fans though, Lestat is definitely one of the greatest vampires out there.

Vlad Dracula, Dracula

“Ah, the readers of this blog. What fine words they read.”

No list of vampires is complete without Dracula, also known as Vlad the Impaler or just Vlad to his wives. A former Romanian king and warlord, Dracula became a vampire after his death, and ruled the Romanian countryside with an iron grip of fear. At some point he heads to London, hoping to start an army that will allow him to take over the world. With a variety of powers at his fingertips, Dracula is all but unstoppable, and several characters die trying to stop this insidious man.

Since there is no technical copyright over the story or character, Dracula is in the public domain and becuase of that has appeared in a variety of works and has been portrayed by numerous actors. Most point to Bela Lugosi in the 1931 film version or Max Shrek in the 1920s silent film Nosferatu as the best portrayals of the character, but my favorites are Gary Oldman as a lovesick vampire searching for his long-lost bride in the 1992 Bram Stoker’s Dracula and Richard Roxburgh’s portrayal in the 2004 film Van Helsing as my favorites.

Akabara Strauss, The Record of a Fallen Vampire

“I will find what I’m looking for.”

Yes it’s another manga, but I swear it’s a good one. Written by Kyo Shiradaira and illustrated by Yuri Kimura, Record follows Akabara Strauss, the former vampire king who forsook his throne to find his queen, who was sealed away somewhere hidden when she couldn’t control her magical powers and nearly destroyed the Earth. Trying to stop Akabara are what’s left of the kingdom, a few vampires and half-vamps who do not want to see the world destroyed. In addition, a curse called the Black Swan follows Akabara in nearly every generation, and it won’t stop until it kills him through a host it selects to do its dirty work.

At first it seems like a simple tragic love-story, but it’s more than that. Soon, Akabara is contacted by a powerful man who wants his help to stop an alien invasion (plot twist!), and Akabara has to join up with vampires, the Black Swan, and humans to stop the invasion. At the same time, we learn the real events that led to the destruction of the vampire kingdom and why Akabara vacated the throne, and in doing so, we learn just how deep and selfless a king can go. A beautiful, introspective work, I looked forward to every volume I got.

That’s all I got for now. If this article is well-recieved, I’ll write a Part II with some more vampires, famous and otherwise. Have a good evening!

That was the question I was posed last week. I was telling a guy about some of the stuff I’d published and some of the stuff that will be published and some of the stuff I hope will be published in the coming months. As I told him, I could just see the awe on his face growing, which made me happy because it meant I might have a new reader to be interested in my work, and what writer doesn’t like people to read his work?

And then the guy asks me, “Are you autistic or something?” Yes, he said that to me.

Now, I do have what’s called Pervasive Developmental Disabilities Not Otherwise Specified (PDD-NOS for short), which is a type of disorder where an individual has some of the markers of autism or Asperger Syndrome but not enough to qualify for either of them, and I don’t mind sharing that with people if the subject comes up. And I did tell this guy that, but I was a little taken aback. I mean come on, who asks that?

When I asked him why he asked me, he said, “You’re just doing so amazing things. You just got to have something.”

So apparently he subscribes to the idea that all great artists either have a condition or a trauma. There is some evidence to support that theory: Stephen King saw his friend run over by a train; van Gogh was mentally ill; Sylvia Plath was bipolar; and Anne Rice lost her father to illness. But not all artists are traumatized or have some mental or social problem. My high school art teacher, who is also a good friend and will be doing the cover to Reborn City, has no traumas or disorders, at least as far as I know, and she’s well-known as an artist and jewelry-maker in Columbus. And Lady Gaga may be a little strange, but not because of anything in her past or brain chemistry.

Amd look at me! I may have both a childhood trauma and a condition, but I don’t let them define me, or attribute them as the sole reasons why I write or write as well as I do. Maybe they help, but so does a lot of other factors, especially experience and hard work!

Well, I ended that conversation as soon as possible and left. I didn’t want him asking any other strange questions to me. It made me wonder though: are other people going to ask that question to me? Has anyone else ever been posed that question? For both, I hope not!

If you have any thoughts, please tell me. I’d love your opinion.

“They’ll laugh at you. They’ll laugh at you. They’ll laugh at you.”

Honestly, those were some awesome lines, and I hope they make it into the new movie.

Earlier this month the makers of the new Carrie film released this trailer, a first look at what fans can expect from a modern-day retelling of the famous Stephen King classic. It shows a bird’s-eye view of the town of Chamberlain, Maine, with voice-overs by different characters giving hints at what happened and creepy music in the background. As the camera goes farther down, we see a burning school, buildings on fire, trees and cars and other signs of destruction all over the street. Eventually, we see Carrie herself, “just a girl”, standing in the street, looking scared and angry as hell. The creepy music playing the whole trailer begins to skip as if on a record player (knowing this story, it probably is).

I cannot wait to see this film, one that not only terrifies us, but teaches us how horrible bullying is and how it should be stopped and nipped in the bud, a theme we seem understand better today than we did when I was in elementary school.

I am counting down the weeks till March 2013. See you at the prom.

Alright, so I finished the new version of Dodi Li, the succubus story I wrote over the summer whose first draft I hated so much I put it away as a learning experience on what happens when your story’s too plot-heavy. But thanks to an idea I got in my creative writing class, I worked out a new story that was much better, and now has a new name: Revenge for a Succubus’s Beloved. Sounds like an awesome title, right?

I think the only thing to stay from the first version of the story was Umuruk, the succubus character. Her character stays the same though, a demoness who fell in love with a human and watches over and protects him. However, that protection can lead to trouble…

I’ll put this story away for a while, especially since NaNoWriMo is in six days and I have to get back into Snake. However I’m certainly going to try to get this one published, and it shouldn’t be too hard, seeing as the latest edition of Writers Digest’s Nevel & Short Story Writer’s Market has a lot more horror publications listed in its pages than it did last year. Fingers crossed and hope for the best.

Once again, have a nice weekend, and don’t go too crazy with the Halloween parties.

Mazel Tov Rachel!!!

Posted: October 26, 2012 in Living and Life

My younger sister is having her bat mitzvah tomorrow, becoming a full woman according to Jewish law. My whole family packed and loaded ourselves into a rental car to head to Cleveland to celebrate Rachel’s milestone, and let me tell you, it’s been crazy preparing. We just finished family photos, and now we’re all waiting for Rachel to finish up the photos with the grandparents.

Tomorrow Rachel will read from the Torah and lead about 2/3 of the service. Afterwards we’ll have lunch, then go home for a nap (or in my case, reading and homework), and tomorrow evening after the Sabbath lets out we’ll throw a huge dance party. I’m really excited for that, because my dad’s wife’s side fo the family really like to party and dance, which matches my party temperament to a T.

On Sunday, there will probably be a big brunch at a hotel or something and then we’ll all high-tail it back to Columbus. But Rachel will have achieved something she’s trained hard for, and that’s the best part, don’t you think?

Have a nice weekend.

Review: Manhattan Vigil

Posted: October 24, 2012 in Review
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aka The 300th episode of Law & Order: Special Victims Unit! Yeah, I know you guys had no idea I was a fan of SVU, from the way I write and what I write about you’d never be able to tell. Is my sarcasm coming through alright?

So yes, this was the 300th episode of SVU, which I’ve been waiting for like crazy ever since I found out about it. And let me just say, it was a pretty decent episode, especially considering the episode based on Fifty Shades of Gray was mediocre and the one on the prostitution ring with terrorist ties was only slightly better. In this episode, a young boy is kidnapped on a subway on the way to a baseball game, and the neighborhood it happened in reminds Detective Benson (Mariska Hargitay), Sergeant John Munch (Richard Belzer) and Captain Don Cragen (Dann Florek), the only remaining members of the original SVU crew since the show began, of a case that would’ve occurred during the show’s first season in 1999. Let’s just say, the similarities between the two cases are more than just coincidences.

What an awesome cast, huh?

The acting was pretty solid. I would’ve liked to see more of Munch (and not just in this episode, but in general; he’s featured in only haf the episodes these days, and he’s a main character!) and of Detective Fin Tutuola (Ice-T’s awesome!). Oh, and somebody bring back ADAs Cabot and Novak(Stephanie March and Diane Neal, respectively), they’re the reason I admire prosecutors so much! But I digress; back to the reviewing.

I thought the way Benson and Detective Amaro (Danny Pino) finally settled their problems–with Cragen’s prodding–was well done. And although some of the connections between the cases took a little work for some to put together, I thought the writing was well done. Let’s keep it up, Dick Wolf and Company!

On my ratings scale, I’m giving this a 3.5 out of 5, showing that while I liked it, I think we need to recapture the energy and tension that we had in the season premiere and lost afterwards.

When I publish Reborn City, that is. I did a little research, and I found out that Smashwords, besides being a retailer for e-books, allows authors to self-publish their works as e-books, formats them for other distributors such as Amazon and Barnes & Noble, and even gives you ISBNs. All this and more for how much? Free! And the authors keep exclusive rights to their works while Smashwords distributes the books. Not only that, but authors keeps up to 85% of the profits (70.5% from partner distributors) and can take their works off or modify them at any time.

With all this and more, is it any suprise that so many authors are using Smashwords? I don’t think so!

I would like to thank my friend Pat Bertram for pointing out the website and its many features (for her blog, click here: http://ptbertram.wordpress.com/ ). Once again, I hope to have RC out as soon as possible, so please bear with me till then and keep reading Rami Ungar the Writer.

If you want to check out Smashwords, here’s the address: http://www.smashwords.com/. While you’re checking it out, I’ll be signing up for a free account. Have a stress-free day.

 

Under all that makeup is a tortured soul. Or an alcoholic. Or he read something I wrote and was really moved. It’s art, it’s up for interpretation.

Now before you start condemning me for making somebody cry, let me just explain what happened: I was at the computer lab yesterday, where I’m well-known among the staff there. I’d told one of the people there about a week ago about my short story “Aasif” (if you haven’t already read it, then look below, the link to the website where it’s posted and the link to the story itself are there) and he said he’d read it. Not only did he read it, but he sent it around the lab and to the office that overseas the lab as well, which I was very grateful for when I found out.

Yesterday I was talking to my friend and he said one of the staff members from the overseeing office had emailed him saying she’d loved the story so much, and that by the end of it she’d been in tears. Now, as a writer I’m happy that I was able to get this sort of reaction from someone who read my work, but as a person I’m a little worried that I don’t feel bad I made someone cry. I know it’s silly, but it’s true.

Still, the fact that I was able to get such a reaction shows that I’m at least on the right track to becoming a writer. Hopefully I can keep it up, especially with “Ripple” coming out in a little less than two weeks.

Here are the links. Enjoy:

Mobius Magazine: http://mobiusmagazine.com/

“Aasif by Rami Ungar”: http://mobiusmagazine.com/fiction/aasif.html

I’ve been stuck on a piece of Dodi Li for the past couple of days, a spot that leads into the climax and ultimately resolves the conflict of the story. Earlier I flashed on a scene from a show I’d been watching, where a captain in a police precinct had a talk show on his TV because it made great background noise to help him with his work. I thought, “The debate is on tonight. Why not hear the candidates’ positions on foreign policy while seeing if I can get a few hundred words into a short story?”

Well, I set up shop in the TV lounge of my dorm about twenty minutes before the debates, I turned on the TV to MSNBC, and you know what? I’m learning a lot about the candidates and their beliefs, and I’ve gotten at least 500 words written down on Dodi Li. Talk about effective!

It’s great when you realize a distraction can help you get the results you want for your work, like that one segment from The Big Bang Theory (still can’t embed it, so I’ll leave the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O1WpE5ntqbQ). Plenty of people feel that distractions detract from your work, but in actuality, they can really help.

Now if you don’t mind, I have to see if I can wrap up Dodi Li while hearing President Obama’s policy on China. Have a good night.

Oh, and before I forget, I changed the doctor and the detective from Dodi Li into male characters. I think that works better: the two adult males, supposedly smarter and more rational, end up getting shown up by a child and a succubus, aka a spiritual, feeling woman. I think it sends a better message than two or three women in leadership positions getting shown up by a demoness, right?